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#1Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat May 26, 2012 7:13 pm

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Shikai Name - Morsus de daemone (Fangs of the Demon)

Release Command - Thirst Morsus de daemone and rip out the lies of tongues. (Full Command) Thirst Morsus de daemone. (short command)

Shikai Appearance -
Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone KR0038A
Morsus is a reverse sword made of a silvery white metal with a black leather wrapped handle. Unlike most swords, the cross guard is unique in design with the lead side being an actual second blade for increased bleeding with a small notch to help with blocking. Upon this smaller blade is some glyphic writing in a dead language that states "Sanguinem in, sanguinem. Est mea ad festum." - 'Blood in, Blood out. All is mine to feast.' The end of the handle also ends in a short spike that can be used for maiming armor to reduce its mobility.

Shikai Ability - Sanguinum Stragis (Bloody Carnage) - Morsus is capable of controlling and manipulating blood, whether it be the blood of its enemies or Elenia's blood. The span of this control is sensitive enough to manipulate and control blood right down the individual cells themslves. Due to the finesse of this conrol, Morsus is capable of devasting damage from even the simplest of cuts. As a direct result of this ability, Morsus has increased bleed effects and any bleeding cuts made by Morsus take twice as long to heal.

Shikai Techniques

    Technique Name - Sanguinum Acus Transire (Bloody Needle)
    Technique Description - By using the power of Sanguinum Stragis, Elenia uses the nearby blood around her as a weapon to attack her enemies with. The blood itself contracts and expands into quarter sized sharp spikes (Needles) aimed to strike at the intended targets. These needles tear through the flesh of the target and essentially mutilate the body making it harder for the body o resist attacks. Usually this attack strikes when the opponent is surrounded by blood or shortly after the user is struck thus making it much harder to dodge.

    2 Tiers Lower - Heavy damage with extensive bleeding. Reduce Dam Con stat by 15.
    1 Tier Lower - Heavy damage with heavy bleeding. Reduce Dam Con stat by 10.
    Equal Tier - Moderate damage with Heavy bleeding. Reduce Dam Con stat by 5.
    1 Tier Higher - Light Damage with Moderate bleeding.
    2 Tiers Higher - Minor damage with light bleeding.

    Technique Name - Induravit Sanguis (Hardened Blood)
    Technique Description - Morsus uses her blood manipulation ability to cause Elenia's blood to thicken and harden, thus increasing her durability and reducing any bleeding effects infglicted upon her as well. In combat it will appear as if the sword just stops against the skin when in reality the blade stops just after breaking the skin when it hits against the veins. More powerful attacks will bite in deeper before the blood hardenning takes full effect on the attack. Elenia can maintain the hardened blood for six posts before it has to cool down for four posts. The hardened blood increases the Damage Control stat by 18 points and all bleed effects inflicted by those up to two teirs higher than Elenia are rendered ineffective.


    Technique Name - Sanguinem non Spiritus ( Blood of no Breath - Hypoxemia)
    Technique Description - Perhaps Morsus's deadliest attack, It actually doesn't deal damage immediately nor directly despite the fact that it appears that Morsus has physically struck the target. In truth morsus passes through the target without so much as leaving a scrath upon the target. In truth though Morsus had imbued the target's blood with something akin to the blood disease Hypoxemia. Hypoxemia causes the blood within the target to stop being able to oxygenate thus suffocating the person from the inside. Mind it does take some time for the victim to feel the full effects of this technique.

    2 Tiers Lower - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer stat loss of 25 per post for 5 turns.
    1 Tier Lower - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 20 per post for 5 turns
    Equal Tier - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 15 for five turns.
    1 Tier Higher - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 10 for five turns.
    2 Tiers Higher - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 5 for five turns.

    The stat loss remains in effect until the end of battle or dispelled by Elenia.
    Can only be used once per target. But it has a ten post cool down between uses.

    Technique Name - Gemina Sanguis Dente (Twin Blood Fang)
    Technique Description - A double strike attack that capitalizes on the blood in the area for a surprise attack. The first strike is done with the zanpakuto while a blade comprised of blood and reishi follows shortly afterwards, usually in the shadow of the sword or from the blindside of the target, making it a difficult move to properly predict and dodge.

    2 Tiers Lower - Extensive damage with extensive bleeding.
    1 Tier Lower - Heavy damage with heavy bleeding.
    Equal Tier - Moderate damage with moderate bleeding.
    1 Tier Higher - Light damage with light bleeding.
    2 Tiers Higher - Minor damage with minor bleeding.

    2 post cool down.

    Technique Name - Sanguinem Oculus Tormento (Blood Eye Cannon)
    Techinique Description - A powerful double edged sword attack that confies the strength of Morsus and Elenia into a beam of energy that is fired from her dead eye. This attack in many respects is quite similar to that of a cero but instead of being a wide beam of energy that, it is compressed into a beam no bigger around than that of a quarter thus making it even more deadlier than a cero. However this ability takes a very serious toll on Elenia's body and over use of it could possibly be fatal even. To perform this technique Elenia must first be using her dead eye ability. After which she stabs Morsus comepletely into her dead left eye. This leaves Elenia temporarily disarmed of her Zanpakuto and her Dead Eye ability as it converts into a chargable super condensed energy ball in her eye. To charge the beam her left eye must remained closed, rendering her Dead Eye ability unusable during the charge time. Upon the completion of the charge up, Elenia opens up her left eye which immediately fires a hyper density beam of peircing reitsu. However Elenia can decide to keep her left eye closed and let the ball of energy to condense even more allowing the attack to become even stronger than it would be normally. This attack is capable of peircing some of the strongest of the Arrancar Heirros.
    Mininum charge time - 1 post
    Maximum charge time - 10 posts
    For each bonus post of charge time, this atacks strength is increased by 2% (20% power increase at maximum charge time). Also due to the nature of how this attack is charged, Elenia is capable of moving and atacking/defending herself while charging this attac, so long as she keeps her left eye closed. However she cannot use any Kido's while charging this attack do to the reitsu condensing of this attack.
    This tech consumes 5% of Elenia's health for the initial charge and an additional 1% for every charge post afterwards for a max of 15% HP consumption at max charge.
    After the attack is fired it takes 1 post for Morsus de Deamone to reform in Elenia's hand.
    Regardless of how long this attack is charged, it has a 10 post minumum cooldown plus 2 per each bonus post of charging for a cooldown of 30 posts if used at maximum power.

    Damage Teir -

    2 Tiers Lower - Shatters and peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 60 (75 at max power) and lower. Causes Extensive truama and damage with moderate to fatal bleeding.

    1 Tier Lower - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 50 (60) and lower. Causes heavy damage with moderate to extensive bleeding.

    Equal Tier - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 35 (45) and lower. Causes moderate damage with moderate bleeding.

    1 Tier Higher - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 25 (30) and lower. Causes light to moderate damage with light to moderate bleeding.

    2 Tiers Higher - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 10 (15) and lower. Causes light damage with light bleeding.

    Technique Name - Sanguis Daemonum Festum (The Blood Demon's Feast)
    Technique Description - By sacrificing a portion of her health, Elenia fills Morsus with an immeasurable amount of power. This power is based on Reitsu but on bloodlust from both Morsus and Elenia. By giving Morsus some of her blood, it puts Morsus's bloodlust into overdrive thus allowing Morsus to strike and hit harder.
    Consumes 5% of Elenia's health.
    Increase Phy Con by 20 Pts.
    Effect last 5 posts before requiring a 4 post cooldown.

#2Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:37 pm

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Morsus is ready fopr grading and all that.

#3Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:58 pm

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i only have 2 problems; The first is the dam control stat take away, take that off. Anything breaking through that is isane, since somone can have higher damage control state.
secondly:Technique Name - Sanguinem non Spiritus ( Blood of no Breath - Hypoxemia)
Technique Description - Perhaps Morsus's deadliest attack, It actually doesn't deal damage immediately nor directly. What this attack does is cause the blood within the target to stop being able to oxygenate thus suffocating the person from the inside. Mind it does take some time but once this attack begins its assault it is only a matter of time before they collapse and fall.

2 Tiers Lower - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer stat loss of 25 per post until they are rendered unconscious from the attack.
1 Tier Lower - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 20 per post until they are rendered unconscious.
Equal Tier - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 15 per post until they are rendered unconscious.
1 Tier Higher - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 10 per post until they are rendered unconscious.
2 Tiers Higher - Hypoxemia causes the target to suffocate causing the victim to suffer a stat loss of 5 per post until they are rendered unconscious.

that is just straight up god mod. making someone unconscious is just something i have to deny.

#4Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 5:37 am

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Ok Cross. Changes made. At least i think they are more appropriate now. XD.

#5Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:26 pm

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accepted

#6Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:09 pm

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Blood eye cannon is a bit too powerful for a shikai tech imo

#7Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:14 pm

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Technique Name - Sanguinem Oculus Tormento (Blood Eye Cannon) Techinique Description - A powerful double edged sword attack that confies the strength of Morsus and Elenia into a beam of energy that is fired from her dead eye. This attack in many respects is quite similar to that of a cero but instead of being a wide beam of energy that, it is compressed into a beam no bigger around than that of a quarter thus making it even more deadlier than a cero. However this ability takes a very serious toll on Elenia's body and over use of it could possibly be fatal even. To perform this technique Elenia must first be using her dead eye ability. After which she stabs Morsus comepletely into her dead left eye. This leaves Elenia temporarily disarmed of her Zanpakuto and her Dead Eye ability as it converts into a chargable super condensed energy ball in her eye. To charge the beam her left eye must remained closed, rendering her Dead Eye ability unusable during the charge time. Upon the completion of the charge up, Elenia opens up her left eye which immediately fires a hyper density beam of peircing reitsu. However Elenia can decide to keep her left eye closed and let the ball of energy to condense even more allowing the attack to become even stronger than it would be normally. This attack is capable of peircing even forbidden Kido arts barriers and even the strongest of the Arrancar Heirros. Mininum charge time - 1 post Maximum charge time - 10 posts For each bonus post of charge time, this atacks strength is increased by 2% (20% power increase at maximum charge time). Also due to the nature of how this attack is charged, Elenia is capable of moving and atacking/defending herself while charging this attac, so long as she keeps her left eye closed. However she cannot use any Kido's while charging this attack do to the reitsu condensing of this attack. This tech consumes 5% of Elenia's health for the initial charge and an additional 1% for every charge post afterwards for a max of 15% HP consumption at max charge. After the attack is fired it takes 1 post for Morsus de Deamone to reform in Elenia's hand. Regardless of how long this attack is charged, it has a 10 post minumum cooldown plus 2 per each bonus post of charging for a cooldown of 30 posts if used at maximum power.

Damage Teir -

2 Tiers Lower - Shatters and peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 80 (95 at max power) and lower. Causes Extensive truama and damage with moderate to fatal bleeding.

1 Tier Lower - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 70 (85) and lower. Causes heavy damage with moderate to extensive bleeding.

Equal Tier - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 50 (60) and lower. Causes moderate damage with moderate bleeding.

1 Tier Higher - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 30 (40) and lower. Causes light to moderate damage with light to moderate bleeding.

2 Tiers Higher - Shatters and Peirces through Barriers equalivent to Kido lvl 15 (20) and lower. Causes light damage with light bleeding.


Key words hereshattering forbidden,kido. Fix that. This can't punch through any bakudo higher then say 50 period. A level 90 bakudo coyld stop damn near everything. Please edit

Then this,is approved not before

#8Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:58 pm

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You do understand thet the Blood Eye Cannon does have some serious drawbacks.

1- It disarms Elenia of her Zanpakuto for anywhere from 2-11 posts.
2- During the charge time of this attack, Elenia is unable to use any kind of Kidu. Thus limiting her to Hakudo and Shunpo only during the charging of this attack.
3- This also renders Elenia's left eye and thus her Dead Eye ability unusable during the entire time the attack is being charged.
4- It also consumes anywhwere between 5%-15% of her health depending on the amount of chage time.
5- Also depending on the charge time it requires anywhere between 10-30 posts to cooldown.

Now looking at these drawbacks. IMO from what ive seen of other people's techs it has a more serious drawback that some i have seen that were of equivalent power with less drawback.

#9Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:28 pm

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Take the forbidden kido bit out and lower it to mid 60's level bakudo and I say ok. Your shikai tech,isn.t blasting through any,higher level then that

#10Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Empty Re: Elenia's Shikai: Morsus de daemone Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:51 am

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Ok. Forbidden removed and lvls lowered. I think that should be reasonable.

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