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Well, when you put it like that, not really, although I'm open to suggestions Smile although I could say his zanpakuto was modified since Oleg grew it inside the tank with Takumi, connected to him with a flesh cord monster thing lol

Erida Seika

Erida Seika
Fauna Yasenha wrote:
also, a good question to how he possesses a shikai, and this was due to the fact that his zanpakuto was "grown" with him, connected to him, allowing for the zanpakuto to forge properly. Besides, Oleg would want him to be that strong and would have designed him acordingly. I doubt when Mayuri created Nemu, he would have wanted her to be strong enough to take on the lieutenant's role, not make her weaker then he needed her to be.

Besides, there hasn't been a lieutenant of squad twelve, there was never one to begin with, which is why Oleg got fed up with having no lieutenant to help him and decided that he should make his own, it's in the alt plot guide that's what happens.

A zanpakuto cannot be made by Oleg, since it's something that is developed by Takumi himself. See the explanation on this below.

Tier equals to spiritual power. Oleg can't pump it into him. Just doesn't fit with the bleach mechanics; he would have to develop it by himself.

OOC-ly, there hasn't been a lieutenant of Division 12. IC, the division has existed for as long as Gotei 13, more than a couple of thousands of years; there surely has been a vice-captain, so where did they go? Sure, the captains can decided who they put as their second-in-command, but I am not convinced that Oleg would do that for a newborn. Nemu has been around for a long time, which is why she is a vice-captain. Takumi is few days old...

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2. Well, normally it would go into strengths, but NPC don't have that, so I include it all within the personality sections ^^; The rest I'll try to work on, but I would like your opinion on this too, as to what Oleg programmed into his head; that would be Oleg's knowledge of various sciences like biological science, the anatomy of living things as well as Oleg technological brillance, allowing him to be as good as a scientist and mechanic as Oleg. This along with the advanced growth rate which allows him to rapidly grow both as a person as well as a fighter, despite having only been born, allows him to have near enough unlimited potential to learn and evolve. of course, I can take suggestions on what else can be programmed into his mind, one thing is possibly using the command phases from bioshock and use them here, here's a example of what they would do within the context of Takumi:

First command: "Would you Kindly?" or WYK for short, whenever Oleg (no one else but Oleg) uses this command along with what he wishes, Takumi would automatically obey him, regardless of what he wanted or wished to do, his body would obey Oleg.

Second command: "Cold Yellow" a variation of code: Yellow, this is a failsafe in case Takumi was either compromised or defied a order Oleg felt was more important to both the soul society or his own twisted research, speaking this within earshot of Takumi (by Oleg alone) causes Takumi's heart to slowly stop beating over the period of seven posts, gently weakening him until he has a heart attack and passes out, Then by speaking the phrase "Hot Red", This causes Takumi to enter a state where he is kept in a unconscious state, but appears to wake and stand up, his blue eyes would appearly cloud as he isn't conscious, but will follow Oleg's every order without knowing he is. Of course, Oleg has a antidote to this, locked in his captain's quarters. Of course, Oleg can stop him during the stages of Cold Yellow by snapping his fingers, causing the effects of Cold Yellow to stop unless spoken again, same with Hot Red.

3. Now, this is something else I took from bioshock; Oleg built his body to appear to be a young adult human (21) then designed the artificial soul to act his age, so to speak, similar to in bioshock, the main character is artificially "aged" to grow from a baby to a adult within the span of a few days. Of course, since this is bleach and Oleg has much more advanced tech and smarts, he could do this as he built the gigai for his new lieutenant. You do have to think of Takumi as a mod soul within a soul reaper's body; Like Nemu or the twin mod souls from the gotei 13 invasion arc, that both possessed zanpakutos and shinigami powers. Besides, since watching the lastest avenger film with the vision giving the line "Well, I was only born yesterday", I really wanted to have a character who is the only one in the entire bleach universe who could say that line <3 and yes, in a way, I'm borrowing from the vision's birth from the film as well as how he was created, alongside how the mod soul twins were created during the aforementioned arc.

2. It is an ability, not a personality trait; the strengths section is not meant for their combat strengths, but to the character's personality strength. Having an advanced growth rate is an ability, I am sure of that.

You could just re-do the enhanced condition ability, and say it like this;

"When Oleg created Takumi, he programmed a selection of mental and physical traits into his body; an advanced growth rate, enhanced mental prowess (observation, learning skills, working memory, etc., are augmented beyond natural), hysterical physical enhancements (+1 FAR to physical strength and speed) as well as access to a large collection of scientific skills and data within his brain. Hysterical physical enhancement refers to a mental phenomena, that allows one to feature strength, speed and stamina beyond what is considered normal, due to a release of epinephrine and norepinephrine in their body - basically, the brain tricks the body to think, that they are strong enough, for example, to lift a car; they do not become physically stronger, but being convinced that they are, they are able to carry out a feat of superhuman strength. Takumi is constantly evolving, via being exposed to an external stimuli, and learns and adapts into new things far more easily than a "real person" could. The collection of information and skills is largely scientific and cold data, making it impractical in social intercourse; he's an adept mechanic, holds expertise in chemistry, anatomy, technology, as well as in other areas of science, but this knowledge is simple, cold data, since he doesn't have actual experience in the science. Due to his quick development, he's spiritually evolved, in the sense he has already became familiar with his zanpakuto and capable of manifesting a shikai."

Also, be sure to include the commands in the app.

3. The aging things I am working on would not apply to an exception like Takumi. There is a single thing, that you seem to get wrong here. Artificial shinigami is not a modified soul, nor they are made in a similar fashion. An artificial shinigami is grown from a fetus (which, given he has advanced growth, could grow to an adult in a few days); Takumi's development and brain is being manipulated by Oleg during these days. You can't build a body; you have to grow it.

There is no problem with him being a few week old. But a day old? No. He's unconscious until the development is completed by Oleg, and awakened when his body is finished; you cannot start out with a zanpakuto, since it must be developed by Takumi himself - a relationship with the spirit and a shikai is obtainable in a few days, given he has the advanced growth, which will apply to the spiritual growth as well.

Honestly, I can't see why this character should be a lieutenant of Division 12? I can't see why Oleg would put him in such a position. He's more fitting as an assistant, rather than a second-in-command to the squad.

And that's all. ^_^

Erida Seika

Erida Seika
To add into Kurai's concerns, Takumi cannot be a mod soul. Nemu is not a mod soul. They're both artificially made shinigami. Not mod souls; canon information. I am getting to the mod soul question at some point, hopefully explaining how it works in canon and how it should work here ^_^

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1. That is indeed true; Oleg didn't build Takumi's zanpakuto, I posted it earlier but basically, Oleg hooked up a Asauchi to Takumi while he was being grown inside the tank, allowing Takumi to naturally develop his zanpakuto while unconscious and right, by the time he is "born" he should possess a lieutenant level spiritual pressure and energy, I doubt it wouldn't be outside of Oleg's ability to do so, I wouldn't say he could pump it in as you suggested, but I seem to recall that Mayuri built a spiritual pressure boosting machine in the cannon, it wouldn't be fair fetched to presure that Oleg would have something similar to boost Takumi's spiritual pressure and energy to the levels he deemed usable.

Yes, I may have been slightly wrong as I read over Oleg's app, it said Oleg was the former lieutenant of squad 12 before becoming captain, but there hasn't been any reccords of a captain before Oleg as far as I know, but as far as I know, Oleg himself has not had a lieutenant, which is where Takumi comes in.

2. Okay, Okay, I get it ^^; I'll put it in as a personal ability ^^; and sure, I will, I just wanted your opinion on them first.

3. Ok, how about this: He is a couple of weeks old in terms of being developed, but I wanna cover from the point of his first day being "born" aka released from the tank and awakened into the world.

4. you understand that Oleg is a sick twisted asshole, right? he wouldn't really care about Takumi, he would make him take the lieutenant place and have him do whatever it took to do his job that Oleg created him for. besides, what's the point of having Takumi created for the purpose of being his lieutenant if he's going to be put down into a third seat's or lower position? I need Takumi to be the lieutenant of squad twelve, not only for the sake of the squad, but also because it's part of the plot that he is.

ok, fine, but I wasn't really sure what to call them really since they were created from mod soul research and development from the project spearhead. So in a way, Takumi is a distant relative to mod souls and I was discussing with Kuroi about giving him a ability that allows him to (for one or two posts) the use of another mod soul's powers, but it must be with consent and Takumi has to be touching the mod soul in question to receive their power temporarily, just wondering what you think about that?

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Updated with the following:

-Updated the personal ability section to include: the advanced growth rate and updated description, provided by Erida and included the commands given to him by Oleg for Oleg's personal use and the alpha protocol

-I checked and confirmed that he isn't a mod soul as his race as he is registered as a artificial soul, built into a shinigami body of Oleg's creation

Erida Seika

Erida Seika
I will get to your reply tomorrow O_O I have some homework I need to do so I probably wont be online for long

Kuroi

Kuroi
I approve Takumi as the Lieutenant if Erida has nothing left to ask or question.

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