where do I add my shadow element again? *derp* xD

Luke Yasenha wrote:Technique Name: Saigo shinpaku taihō (Final Heartbeat cannon) (Bankai only technique)
Technique Description: As the name suggests, this is the final technique of Luke's bankai; this requires taking in people's emotional pain and bad feelings into his very soul; although more people can give him more if they are willing since Luke cannot take them forcibly from someone, it must be voluntary from people, once this is done, Luke tears out his soul core; which takes the shape of a black orb about the size of a tennis ball or basically, big enough to fit in his hand before he also tears his heart from his chest, his bankai going into the heart before he fuses his soul with his heart, which is still beating together, making the heart glow and become semi translucent, looking like black glass while still retaining fluid movement with two interlocking halos are around the heart like a atom's rings, he then raises the heart towards the target before a large blast fires when the heart does a deep beat that everyone within fifteen miles of his position can hear clearly; the blast end facing the opponent will take on the appearance of the heart as it blasts the opponent with a blast equal to a twenty megaton nuke, along with all the emotional pain and negative feelings of everyone that gave them to Luke, although its said that the more people there is to give their pain to Luke, the stronger the final attack is, but after the attack, Luke will loose his reiatsu and spirit energy as he falls to the ground where it will take two turns for him to die as at the end of his second post, if no one has put his heart back in, Luke will die as is the fact of the attack being "Final", Reiatsu and Spirit energy recovery will be painfully slowly as well as the fact that even if they save Luke, he will be nothing but a empty shell, since using this attack costs him his soul and normally his life if no one saves him by the end of the two turns. Once per his entire life

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

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OOC: I'll come back to tier effect chart in a minute, although some help with what this final attack should do will be helpful ^_^

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Denying this, as it still is using emotions as a power. Even if the emotions/feelings must be given willingly, it is still a banned power thus would be unfair for me to approve. Even if it has grave consequences to using, it still is banned. Sorry. ^^;

It could be my connection, but me, Sage, and a few members had lag problems a few months ago. We had to clear out some boards in order to stop it. Yes, it may be connections, but the site has too much data on its server for our networks. I'll look into it.

Technique Name: Gyōretsu sekai
Technique Description: This is the manifestation of Luke's true bankai where its ability can create illusions so realistic, that feel so real and lifelike that no one would even question that weren't real; illusions created and anyone entering the range of Luke's bankai reiatsu can be trapped within a "idolised" illusion, a dream world of possibilities, normally more effective on people Luke has fought before since then he can put in elements that will make the world of his illusion much more perfect for those people that he knows better, which gets better the more he is able to analysis and understand what someone truly wishes more than anything, he also uses this ability to make lifelike substitution of himself or creating anything within the illusion that's indisputable from the real thing; the only weakness in this technique is similar to how people realised that they were in a virtual world in the matrix movies; those of equal or higher tiers will have a feeling in the back of their minds of something being wrong in the world; they may or may not know why it is but if not, the feeling grows until they work out that the world isn't real but Luke's bankai illusion, the way to escape the illusion is to find the illusion version of Luke, who would be someone in control of the land they are in, for example; if the illusion is in a big city, Luke would be the mayor of that city or a big, business CEO or something along those lines, get to the illusion Luke and kill him, releasing them from the illusion.

there is also the fact that, if one is close enough to anything created within the range of Luke's bankai and the illusion created by it; one of equal or higher tiers can sense Zetsubō's reiatsu coming from the illusion as well.

also this ability shares a crippling fault that is also shared whenever he uses his dreamwalker ability; any damage done to anyone in or being hit by a illusion; the damage is reflected on their real bodies as well, this includes Luke so by killing Luke in the illusion, you are also killing the real one as well, the only counter to this that Luke has is to put his body into a mist state that, even if he is killed in the illusion, he won't die in the real world, the effect of them being released will still happen but Luke won't feel the aftershock, more a memory of him dying in whatever way happened in the illusion with all the pain and suffering that comes with dying

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:
Opponent is One Tier Lower:
Opponent is Equal Tier:
Opponent is One Tier Higher:
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:

(OOC: any suggestions for the tier effect chart with be most helpful)

bumping for making edits to my final heartbeat cannon and for someone to check my new technique

Luke Yasenha wrote:Technique Name: Gyōretsu sekai
Technique Description: This is the manifestation of Luke's true bankai where its ability can create illusions so realistic, that feel so real and lifelike that no one would even question that weren't real; illusions created and anyone entering the range of Luke's bankai reiatsu can be trapped within a "idolised" illusion, a dream world of possibilities, normally more effective on people Luke has fought before since then he can put in elements that will make the world of his illusion much more perfect for those people that he knows better, which gets better the more he is able to analysis and understand what someone truly wishes more than anything, he also uses this ability to make lifelike substitution of himself or creating anything within the illusion that's indisputable from the real thing; the only weakness in this technique is similar to how people realised that they were in a virtual world in the matrix movies; those of equal or higher tiers will have a feeling in the back of their minds of something being wrong in the world; they may or may not know why it is but if not, the feeling grows until they work out that the world isn't real but Luke's bankai illusion, the way to escape the illusion is to find the illusion version of Luke, who would be someone in control of the land they are in, for example; if the illusion is in a big city, Luke would be the mayor of that city or a big, business CEO or something along those lines, get to the illusion Luke and kill him, releasing them from the illusion.

there is also the fact that, if one is close enough to anything created within the range of Luke's bankai and the illusion created by it; one of equal or higher tiers can sense Zetsubō's reiatsu coming from the illusion as well.

also this ability shares a crippling fault that is also shared whenever he uses his dreamwalker ability; any damage done to anyone in or being hit by a illusion; the damage is reflected on their real bodies as well, this includes Luke so by killing Luke in the illusion, you are also killing the real one as well, the only counter to this that Luke has is to put his body into a mist state that, even if he is killed in the illusion, he won't die in the real world, the effect of them being released will still happen but Luke won't feel the aftershock, more a memory of him dying in whatever way happened in the illusion with all the pain and suffering that comes with dying

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:
Opponent is One Tier Lower:
Opponent is Equal Tier:
Opponent is One Tier Higher:
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:

(OOC: any suggestions for the tier effect chart with be most helpful)

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First off, this seems too OP in the regard of people around. What if he used it in Seireitei? Would just anyone be caught up in the illusion including the soutaichou? It needs to be limited to those in a certain meter range around Luke or whatever. Please rethink this. Also, this needs a postcount and cooldown. He cannot keep a power on forever. Eventually it will wear off and the victim will be free. Another thing is that illusions are usually fairly obvious. There needs to be more ways to negate this.

As for your heartbeat canon, please quote it. I can't keep track of all the powers in this thread. xD

Spoiler:

Ok, Yuki-chan, here's the edited technique and about my new technique; it was just a idea to push the idea of illusions so real that you wouldn't be able to tell the difference apart from a somewhat mental tick in your brain telling you its not real but for the rest, I'll work on it and bump it when I've edited it

Fill out the tier effect chart please. =] If it's a cannon, the impact should have different effects on people depending on their tier.

And your abilities are very creative and good, Luke. ^.^ It's just that it's my job to make sure things are fair for other members on the site.

I understand, although I need some help with the tier effect chart which is one of the few things I have yet to master, I'll try my best but if you, can you give me some "tips"?

I think you're over-complicating it, Luke. ^.^

It's a reiatsu canon, basically, using full power. So what happens when someone gets hit? Do they get severe burns? Start on equal tier like

Equal Tier: Opponent gets severe 4th degree burns if hit.

Then make it less potent as tiers go up, and more potent if tiers go down. =] Does this make sense?