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#61Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Wed Jun 25, 2014 10:10 pm

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Technique Name: Kokumu no Masamune (Masamune of the black Mist)
Technique Description: This technique is released with a alternative shikai release command, "Fall into the void..." along with the zanpakuto name, but instead of the normal release stance with him taking a fencing stance, he brings his zanpakuto around with his arm straight and full out to the right side, the blade will erupt into black mist as it normally does during release but the final shikai form is different in the fact that now the blade is solid intend of being made of mist, although it still has a thin twirl of black mist around the blade from the tip to where the blade met the hilt, the blade is now a fully, razor sharp sword but because of Zetsubō's unwillingness to fight that would cause bloodshed, the blade does not have any of it's shikai abilities while in this form, although it has a effect similar to Luke's Kangeki Byakurai as when it cuts a enemy, it numbs the area it cuts, making the area feel cold and numb as well as the skin of the area cut turn a cold blue, due to the extreme cold of the blade as the blade was made from solidifying the black mist from its true shikai.

Shikai appearance in both shikai and "True" shikai states:

#62Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Wed Jun 25, 2014 10:12 pm

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Technique Name: Kokumu no Masamune (Masamune of the black Mist)
Technique Description: This technique is released with a alternative shikai release command, "Fall into the void..." along with the zanpakuto name, but instead of the normal release stance with him taking a fencing stance, he brings his zanpakuto around with his arm straight and full out to the right side, the blade will erupt into black mist as it normally does during release but the final shikai form is different in the fact that now the blade is solid intend of being made of mist, although it still has a thin twirl of black mist around the blade from the tip to where the blade met the hilt, the blade is now a fully, razor sharp six foot sword but because of Zetsubō's unwillingness to fight that would cause bloodshed, the blade does not have any of it's shikai abilities while in this form, although it has a effect similar to Luke's Kangeki Byakurai as when it cuts a enemy, it numbs the area it cuts, making the area feel cold and numb as well as the skin of the area cut turn a cold blue, due to the extreme cold of the blade as the blade was made from solidifying the black mist from its true shikai.

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Enemy will see their skin turn blue with a numbing feeling around the part that the blade cut, numbing lasts for three turns
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Enemy will see their skin turn blue with a numbing feeling around the part that the blade cut, numbing lasts for two turns
Opponent is Equal Tier: Enemy will see their skin turn blue with a numbing feeling around the part that the blade cut, numbing lasts for one turn
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Enemy will only see their skin darken slightly but doesn't numb, although the spot cut will feel cold to the touch
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Enemy will only get some goose bumps and some chilling sensation around the area as a indication they have been hit at all

Shikai appearance in both shikai and "True" shikai states:

#63Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Thu Jun 26, 2014 3:25 am

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Ability Name: Reiatsu of living shadows
Effect: This is Luke's true manifestation of his reiatsu, when releasing his reiatsu, his shadow will look to being moving by itself and have tentacles coming off of it, this reiatsu normally drains the color from the surrounding area, making the area affected seem bleak and morbid like the life was drained from the surrounding area, Luke also uses a variety of techniques made from his own shadow and shadows within a 10 meter radius of Luke's area of effect; Luke's reiatsu also tends to infect reiatsu based techniques like kido and ceros; turning them black and they tend to grow tentacles of shadows that attack and cause the techniques to backfire on the opponent, especially if the opponent is stealing reiatsu for techniques. this part of Luke's reiatsu lasts three posts before three post cool down.

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Kido/cero/any energy-based technique using this reiatsu will backfire.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Kido/cero/any energy-based technique using this reiatsu will backfire but only cause half damage.
Opponent is Equal Tier: Kido/cero/any energy-based technique using this reiatsu can still be fired but with only one-third of the strength it would of had.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Kido/cero/any energy-based technique using this reiatsu can still be fired but with half of the strength it would of had.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Kido/cero/any energy-based technique using this reiatsu can still be fired and have be mostly unaffected by the infected reiatsu, for these tiers, it will give the technique they are using a AR+1 boost during that attack only.

theses techniques include the following:

Technique Name: Shadow longsword
Technique Description: Luke as able to create a second sword, made of his own shadow, creating a longsword that was thick but long, similar to Ginjo's sword from the fullbringer arc but the blade itself is pure black and shaped like one, long continuous flame with a long handle with black wrapping around the hilt, its strength is equal to Luke's zanpakuto when in its sealed form but no stronger then the sealed form of a zanpakuto

Longsword Appearance (only the parts that are purple are black and minus the skull at the center of the cross guard):

Technique Name: Shadow Manifestation
Technique Description: A somewhat literal version of the technique where Luke's shadow becomes solid with a life of its own with it peeling away from Luke's feet and forms into a purely black version of Luke; it normally wields the Shadow longsword in his left hand and normally mirrors Luke's actions, for example: if Luke made a swing with his zanpakuto in his right hand in a arc from a opponent's left shoulder, across the chest to their right hip, the Shadow Luke with do the same but from the mirror opposite but sometimes it will act on its own accord during a battle, especially if the Shadow Luke gets caught up in a battle and gets separated from Luke on a one-on-one battle with his opponent. His power is always set one tier below Luke's current tier for safety reasons because if Luke allowed the Shadow Luke to be as strong, he could try to attack him or even attempt to kill the original. manifestation lasts about six posts or less, depending on Luke's level of spirit energy, post limit may increase with raises in spiritual power/tier or less if Luke's spirit energy becomes too weak to keep the Shadow Luke manifested and the shadow will return to Luke and become a normal shadow again or if the shadow is defeated before the post limit runs out, where is it "killed" and returns to Luke and becomes his shadow once again. The clone constantly drains on Luke's reiatsu, which is why the weaker he gets, the less time the shadow can stay manifested, for example: if Luke manifests when it lasts for Six posts but Luke takes damage and uses more of his spirit energy and reiatsu, the time the shadow can stay manifested drops from six to three


Technique Name: Shadow tentacles/arms
Technique Description: Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches. the additional tentacles/arms can be cut off like regular body parts, although their skin is armored with dragon-like scales, they can be cut through, given a fast and hard cut to it, Although Luke can reform them but not instantly. each arm/tentacle lasts for about six posts, Reform takes two posts per part cut off/destroyed, when deactivated, takes a four post cooldown before reuse or never if Luke runs out of Reiatsu before the cooldown ends

Arms Appearance (Imagine black instead of orange):

Tentacles Appearance:

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Tentacles are highly effect in inflicting damage and trapping tiers of this type, arms produce large damage to include broken bones, takes three cuts of a shikai released weapon to cut through the tentacles or arms
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Tentacles have a descent effect in inflicting damage and trapping tiers of this type, arms produce descent damage to include some broken bones, takes two cuts of a shikai released weapon to cut through the tentacles or arms
Opponent is Equal Tier: Tentacles have a good effect in inflicting damage and trapping tiers of this type, arms produce a good amount of damage to include a few broken bones, takes one cuts of a shikai released weapon to cut through the tentacles or arms
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Tentacles have a hard time in inflicting damage and trapping tiers of this type, arms produce a ok amount of damage, including some brusing and other noticable punch damage, takes two cuts of a sealed weapon to cut through the tentacles or arms
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Tentacles have a very hard time in inflicting damage and trapping tiers of this type, arms produce nearly no noticeable amount of damage, only useful in stopping attacks or doing basic punch damage, takes one cut of a sealed weapon to cut through the tentacles or arms

Technique Name: Wall of shadows
Technique Description: Luke can shape his shadow to protect himself from attacks from close quarters attacks equal to a sealed zanpakuto and hado techniques under #40 without incantation. Lasts for six posts, Takes three posts to cooldown before reuse or never if Luke runs out of Reiatsu

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Needs shikai level techniques to break through which it can take three of before breaking apart, the same for kido under #40
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Needs shikai level techniques to break through which it can take two of before breaking apart, the same for kido under #40
Opponent is Equal Tier: only needs sealed state to be take out, takes three attacks before breaking, Same for kido under #40
Opponent is One Tier Higher: only needs sealed state to be take out, takes two attacks before breaking, Same for kido under #40
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Only needs the opponent's bare hands to take out, can take two attacks before breaking down, Same for kido under #40


OOC: I've done a lot of techniques with this special reiatsu so I need some help to do all of the technique effect charts or at least, tell me which needs a technique effect chart and which don't as well as suggestions which will be most helpful

#64Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 3:52 am

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BUMP MESSAGE

#65Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 6:17 am

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All thpse techniques. o.O Sorry for taking so long. Getting to them~

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#66Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 6:44 am

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Technique Name: Kokumu no Masamune (Masamune of the black Mist)
Technique Description: This technique is released with a alternative shikai release command, "Fall into the void..." along with the zanpakuto name, but instead of the normal release stance with him taking a fencing stance, he brings his zanpakuto around with his arm straight and full out to the right side, the blade will erupt into black mist as it normally does during release but the final shikai form is different in the fact that now the blade is solid intend of being made of mist, although it still has a thin twirl of black mist around the blade from the tip to where the blade met the hilt, the blade is now a fully, razor sharp sword but because of Zetsubō's unwillingness to fight that would cause bloodshed, the blade does not have any of it's shikai abilities while in this form, although it has a effect similar to Luke's Kangeki Byakurai as when it cuts a enemy, it numbs the area it cuts, making the area feel cold and numb as well as the skin of the area cut turn a cold blue, due to the extreme cold of the blade as the blade was made from solidifying the black mist from its true shikai.

Tier Effect Chart please. The coldness obviously should not work on those who are stronger than you.

Technique Name: Reiatsu of living shadows
Technique Description: This is Luke's true manifestation of his reiatsu, when releasing his reiatsu, his shadow will look to being moving by itself and have tentacles coming off of it, this reiatsu normally drains the color from the surrounding area, making the area effected seem bleak and morbid like the life was drained from the surrounding area, Luke also uses a variety of techniques made from his own shadow and shadows within a 10 meter radius of Luke's area of effect, theses techniques include the following:

This seems more like a release or personal ability more than a technique, especially if there are other 'techniques' using it. Please change this.

Technique Name: Shadow Manifestation
Technique Description: A somewhat literal version of the technique where Luke's shadow becomes solid with a life of its own with it peeling away from Luke's feet and forms into a purely black version of Luke; it normally wields the Shadow longsword in his left hand and normally mirrors Luke's actions, for example: if Luke made a swing with his zanpakuto in his right hand in a arc from a opponent's left shoulder, across the chest to their right hip, the Shadow Luke with do the same but from the mirror opposite but sometimes it will act on its own accord during a battle, especially if the Shadow Luke gets caught up in a battle and gets separated from Luke on a one-on-one battle with his opponent. His power is always set one tier below Luke's current tier for safety reasons because if Luke allowed the Shadow Luke to be as strong, he could try to attack him or even attempt to kill the original. manifestation lasts about six posts or less, depending on Luke's level of spirit energy, post limit may increase with raises in spiritual power/tier or less if Luke's spirit energy becomes too weak to keep the Shadow Luke manifested and the shadow will return to Luke and become a normal shadow again.

Okay, first off any 'clones' should take up half of your power, not just be slightly weaker than you. Also, there needs to be a way to prevent/stop the shadow. I assume this is just simply 'killing' it? =]

Technique Name: Shadow tentacles/arms
Technique Description: Luke can manifest either eight tentacles (four on each side) or four, large additional shadow arms that float with two floating either side of his shoulders and two floating just under his own arms, his tentacles can be used to wrap around opponents, used as whips or like ropes for other uses while the arms can grab and attack using strong punches.

Needs tier effect chart. How can you prevent/stop/destroy this? Also add a cooldown.

Technique Name: Wall of shadows
Technique Description: Luke can shape his shadow to protect himself from attacks from close quarters attacks equal to a sealed zanpakuto and hado techniques under #40 without incantation

Cooldown please.

With Tier Effect Charts, fill them out as if your attack succesfully and offensively hit an opponent. For defensive techniques, just say who could get through your defense or who couldn't, but with what power. For example, those two tiers lower may need a release to get through your defense while those two tiers stronger can get through it effortlessly. =] Does this make sense?

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#67Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:52 pm

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Spoiler:

this is because it is a personal technique, although how do I change it exactly?

#68Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:53 pm

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also, can you take a look again at my kido and my new bankai abilities?

#69Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 7:34 pm

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I approve your kido.

Technique Name: Touch of Fear (Bankai only technique)
Technique Description: one of Luke's deadliest techniques in his bankai, he extends his hand into the targets chest and sends a pulse of extremely powerful terror through the target's system as the target's heart will try to compensate for the overload of terror, it works too well as it stops the heart of the target completely, their skin will turn a corpse-like blue with their blood veins turning black, putting the target to the point of almost dying in a state of semi-death, not complete death though but those that do die from this technique are known as died via "the blue death" or simply from "being overexposed to a large amount of fear within a second"

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: have the greatest effect, heart will stop and they will go into a state of semi death for five posts.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: has a decent effect, the heart will stop and they will go into a state of semi death for three posts.
Opponent is Equal Tier: Has a good effect, the heart will stop but they will only be knocked unconscious for two posts.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: has a effect but not quite as effective as normal, only making their heart beat irregular and putting them into shook for two posts.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: the effect isn't very effective, only making their heartbeat irregular and putting them into shook for a single post.

Way too OP. First off, you cannot project emotions or feelings such as terror. That is banned. Also, making them go unconscious seems OP to me. Stunning an opponent is one thing, because they can still make defenses or break the stun somehow. But unconsciousness is too much. Anything can happen in that time against the opponent's will.

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#70Technique request - Page 7 Empty Re: Technique request Fri Jun 27, 2014 7:36 pm

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Change it like this:

Ability Name: Reiatsu of living shadows
Effect: This is Luke's true manifestation of his reiatsu, when releasing his reiatsu, his shadow will look to being moving by itself and have tentacles coming off of it, this reiatsu normally drains the color from the surrounding area, making the area effected seem bleak and morbid like the life was drained from the surrounding area, Luke also uses a variety of techniques made from his own shadow and shadows within a 10 meter radius of Luke's area of effect, theses techniques include the following...


Simple enough. =] What release are these techniques to be used in? Bankai?

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